In a Snowbound Dream Land... - Page 1

posted May 16th, 2013, 3:21 am

...Don't you hate it when you see flaws in your work when its probably the reader's first impression?

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view D00D64's profile

May 16th, 2013, 3:12 am

D00D64

In Medias Res!

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And here's the first page of "Kirby's Dream Land If... - Kirby of the Nuclear Winter"! It's a more serious than my Sonic AIDS fare, and I'm taking it more seriously too! I'm not going to let myself fall pray to poor organisation again! Least not to start!

Yeah, kind of starting the story a bit in the middle, but hey, who wants to start with mountains of exposition?

And yeah, this is Sonic AIDS' site layout (modded from whistleonwild's layout) and the same comic style, but why fix what ain't broke, right? I'd probably switch the Emerald ratings eventually, but... eh.

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view King_Rover's profile

May 16th, 2013, 7:45 am

King_Rover

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(Change the emeralds to the Lollipop power up.)


I would make the overused joke that Kirby is a homicidal maniac that terrorizes Dreamland.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

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view Darkblane257's profile

May 16th, 2013, 9:49 am

Darkblane257

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Now this I wanna see.

Keep up the great work. :)

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view Afrohawkman's profile

May 16th, 2013, 10:18 am

Afrohawkman

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Adeleine in a comic makes me so happy, you have no idea. Can't wait to see more, looks good so far dude!

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May 16th, 2013, 1:37 pm

godmoderncommander

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Keep it up. This comic has promise.

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view Firecat1311's profile

May 16th, 2013, 2:35 pm

Firecat1311

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That Kirby sprite in the last panel... I know you didn't make it, but it looks kind of deformed, I'm sure there are better alternatives.
Anyways, from what I can see here, this looks pretty well written, I'll fav it for now.

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view D00D64's profile

May 16th, 2013, 3:07 pm

D00D64

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@Firecat1311: And here I was hoping nobody would notice :P

Yeah, it cape with the sheet and I tried fixing it up, but it didn't turn out so great. I'll try my hand at a new sprite.

EDIT: And then I tried fixing it. I think I got the eyes wrong though. I also made one other incredibly minor change but EH.

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May 16th, 2013, 3:50 pm

Firecat1311

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@D00D64: Yeah, that one's much better looking

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view MEEP GOD's profile

May 16th, 2013, 4:34 pm

MEEP GOD

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My eyes must be deceiving me!

DOOD of all people made such a serious comic?

Beautiful idea, heavy yet attention grabbing story, the snow falling in every panel shows great effort towards detail...

And we've only had only one comic that gives us little detail towards four characters, and and I've already been given a decent picture of what Lunar and Butch's personalities might be like.

And you want me to believe DOOD made this AND took it seriously?

... Let me just add this to my favorites so i can see how this turns out.

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view Luigi_96's profile

May 16th, 2013, 8:24 pm

Luigi_96

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Seems good so far... +fav

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view DSeries's profile

August 28th, 2013, 10:32 pm

DSeries

Here I am

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Reading this comic again from the beginning, being filled with inspiration. It's so odd how inspiring it is. D:

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